jueves, 18 de febrero de 2010

For and against essay (William Wu He)

It’s 18 a very good age to leave home?

This is a good question… Like in everything, it depends. To leave home is a big decision, because you have to survive by your own skills, and you will have to improve your skills day after day.

On the one hand 18 is a good age to leave home because some people need to feel "fresh air in their face" and get freedom. Some people who live with their parents, are drowning in their own homes and they need to breathe fresh air outside their families. This type of people normally need their own vital space, as you can see in some commercials of cars on TV, where the driver is surrounded by an aura of colours, and I don't think you can get it living with your parents.

But on the other hand leaving home is not good because some people are very dependent on their parents, and to leave home means that there’s no mum to make your lunch, to wash and iron your clothes, and so on...If you are lazy it’s not a good idea to leave home.

In my opinion to leave home when you're 18 years old is something good. I want to live on my own because I want to feel this experience in spite of working at home and doing all the house tasks by myself.

2 comentarios:

  1. No comments... It's perfect, a ten right here and right now!
    william

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  2. Willy, remember that you have to write your name below your comment... (I did it for you!!)

    I'm glad you have been the first again... But "a ten right here right now" it's a bit too much, don't you think?

    Have a look at my corrections and my "decorations"... (You can change them if you don't like them)

    Good luck on Monday morning. Remember to revise passive and reported speech( apart from conditionals of course)
    Linis

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